This is one of those thought-moving pieces of yours. Probably the best one yet in that style. But what I think of it? Does life have a purpose, does it truly have a meaning? Each part of this world was created for a reason, but what is that reason? And what happens after death? Is it something to be believed in? And afterlife, heaven and hell, angels and demons. What is the purpose of it all?

Death can really lead us in Life though. I felt and learned a lot from my brother's death, and though I hate to say that, I'm better off with what I now know. Your heart is just that...yours. Stay true to yourself and don't try to be someone else. Art was the air he breathed, and his life inspired mine. With every breath I take, I feel a piece of him with me.

"So, now you're moving forward, with the breathe of his life moving you along." - my freshmen seminar professor.

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Thanks. What you say is very true. And I understand it perfectly. Take care, Dayin-sama. Love you.

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Love you as well. Take care.

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Pretty mysterious but it works well with couplet structure.





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Thank you.

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A lot of people would say that it's random words put together...

Put when I look at this I see...Wisedom...It really does make me think of life.
I like the flow you have and theres one thing that impresse me with what you've made here...

Its HARD to make beautiful poetry that doesn't rhyme....Its incredibly hard to make poetry that catches peoples attention when it doesn't rhyme.

You made it beautilful and it surely caught my attention as I'm faving it.

Thank you, Dexpo. That means a lot.

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You're very welcome Kage.
It's a beautiful poem! ^^

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